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Good.

It was pretty sweet. But I think the percussion was too loud, and too harsh. Needs a melody too, if you can conjure one up.

Interesting.

Sort of an interesting industrial feel. I like it. However, some of the instruments seemed to sort of cut off abruptly, I didn't like that so much. Also I think it needs a bit of an intro. All in all, though, well done, keep producing.

xXDarkWoodsXx responds:

yeah, i now what you mean, but i didnt have time to fix it unfortunatly, and it was a problem that occured at the very last momnet, but still, thanks for revieiwing!!!

xXDarkWoodsXx

I say!

I liked this quite a bit. Made me want to learn how to use garage band kind of. Also, I'm partial to ice-related songs. Nice work.

camman007 responds:

Garageband is a very easy program to use and most of their samples are of very high quality so I highly endorse it. I'm also a fan of ice/cold/winter themed songs as well. Glad you enjoyed it!

It has potential.

I like where you're going with it. It just feels a bit crowded and slightly confusing at some parts. The instruments go together well, just work with the melody a bit. Eight of ten. Four of five.

Irregular.

Beat is too irregular and hard to make out. The instrument that kicked in around :22 is too much louder than everything else. Not sure why you used realistic percussion instead of 8-bit noise track stuff. It needs improvement.

Coolio.

This song has the best reviews section ever.

Ever.

On a side note, I'd say that the beat felt like it was a bit off part of the time, during the transition from one part of the song to the next, especially. Maybe that's just me. Still a catchy tune though. Thumbs up.

SolusLunes responds:

Oh man you have no idea.

The reviews for this song are a cavalcade of comedy. :D

Ambience is right.

It's too formulaic.

...that is what it said, right? Anyways, pretty nice song here. Definition of ambience, I'd say. Eerie in a way. But also pretty calm and flowing and wow it's great, good job here.

Gillenium responds:

Yup, that's what I say in the song :P

This response is too formulaic, too, but... Thanks!

Nice.

It sounds more like Ambient than Hip Hop. It's pretty calming actually. Regardless, nice work.

Hmm...

I like where you're going with the song, but all that percussion was a bit too heavy and they kind of gave me a headache after a bit. That's not to say I didn't like it but I think you may want to make it quieter or change it.

dec-1310 responds:

It's the bad guy of a movie? you want a calm song?

Lots of room for improvement.

It's... short. And it needs a melody. The deep instrument that starts up around 0:06 could stand to be lessened in volume. That stretch with the stand-alone percussion playing wasn't that great, get rid of that. Sorry if it sounds like I'm hacking and killing away at your song with criticism, but there's a lot to improve here.

ufmshamrock responds:

LOL, im not offended by people telling me what needs to be done with my songs.... how else im i gonna improve. Thanks for your help

Now, I'm floating three meters off the ground, upside down, in some abandoned warehouse on the moon. I'm very uncertain about what kind of help I should ask for in the first place, but if you think you could lend a hand somehow, I'd be very appreciative.

Age 30, Male

I... don't do much.

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